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    dots Submission Name: Kisses & Raindropsdots
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    Author: Broken-lands
    ASL Info:    13/female/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 22/34/32
    Words: 128
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 238
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    ~

    Kisses are longing from our lips,
    raindrops slowly fall on our feet.
    Why can you not see,
    the way the roses bleed?
    Why can you not understand,
    the way my heart beats.

    Is it that confusing?
    Is it really so hard to see?
    You seem to not realize
    the way you can hypnotize.
    You don't seem to see
    when my tears fall from my cheeks.

    I cannot understand it either,
    but still I try.
    I try to understand why it is so romantic
    to kiss under the rain,
    getting completely wet.

    Can you see my eyes shining?
    My heart is full of bliss,
    my heart is full of tears.
    My heart is happy,
    because we finally kissed.

    ~




    Submitted on 2007-11-08 20:19:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      sweet. this had a nice rhythm. a really good flow. i have to say it was kindof cliché though.
    | Posted on 2007-11-26 00:00:00 | by stasisindarknes | [ Reply to This ]
      yeah, why do we like to kiss in the rain?? :D awesome poem
    | Posted on 2007-11-22 00:00:00 | by Tomo | [ Reply to This ]
      hey
    this is a good poem esp from a 12yo...wel i completely understand ur poem coz its something that i have experienced n im yet to write a poem on it thanks to ur poem maybe i will soon anyways till then check out my stuff comment on some if u like (i recomend a promise)
    cheers
    | Posted on 2007-11-17 00:00:00 | by anooplokur | [ Reply to This ]
      if you ever get a book published tell me, at this rate that's where you are headed. i feel week as an artist next to you. this is art, that is all i can say about it. just beautifully written.
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by DBC | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Very Well Written!!!!!!!
    I cant believe this write came from the mind of a 12 year old!!!!
    My Friend your knowledge of life is far beyond your years
    At your young age it almost seems like you lived the life of a full grown adult in your 12 short years
    Again Fantastic Job!!!!
    I eagerly await more new and exciting writes from you
    You definately have talent
    Please dont stop writing as it Helps Heal
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      A sweet poem. It has got a certain sort of innocence and that's beautiful :)
    | Posted on 2007-11-10 00:00:00 | by vedanta19 | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh my gosh, I wish this poem would come true for me. This poem really spoke to me, especially the second stanza. It is confusing, I know. This reminds me of a guy I like, you spoke to me, it seems like, specifically. I am going to add this to my favorites. You can't really improve on this I think.
    | Posted on 2007-11-09 00:00:00 | by jasonsanctuary | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow this is special, It really is
    | Posted on 2007-11-09 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]



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