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Dear Love


Author: CaughtRedhanded
ASL Info:    18/F/TN
Elite Ratio:    4.23 - 94 /41 /22
Words: 168
Class/Type: Poetry /BrokenHeart
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Dear Love


The sound of your voice
The feel of your hand on my cheek
The thought we will be together…
forever
The deep sensation we will last…
forever

Today I wish for yesterday…


I hardly ever hear your voice
I never feel your touch
My thoughts wonder into horrid bliss
We are now a never lasting thing

I remember the nights
Our nights we called them
So full of love a passion…

I miss the love I felt between us
Why my Dear Love,
You broke my heart
You make me hurt

I hate myself for losing you
The pain so deep down
I cant take it
And I bet your with her now

she’s who you share:
the sound of each others voice
the touch of each others cheeks
the thoughts of your togetherness
the deep sensations you feel for one another

My heart will always be heavy,
Because you just up and walked away




Submitted on 2007-11-09 09:18:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I can really relate to this, and it is amazing caz there are not many poems that I can say that about...

Great write...

Loved it babe!

<3

Liz
| Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by Liz_Renee | [ Reply to This ]


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