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    dots Submission Name: Tormenting..dots
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    Author: dark_dreams6789
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 6/11/12
    Words: 90
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 64
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 569



    Description:
       March? 2007.

    Sometimes I extremely dislike people and emotions...

    Not very good, but not completely horrid? Maybe?


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    dotsTormenting..dots
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    I know this feeling so well,
    This despair,
    This contemplation of how to make things fair.
    I know this feeling so well,
    The one you give me.
    The one that makes my head swell.
    I know this feeling so well,
    So why do I hesitate?
    Why do I keep falling down this same well?

    It all repeats
    To a simple, complex beat.
    The beat of your heart
    The beat of your soul.
    Stop dragging me down
    Stop beating in sync.
    Part from me now,
    Please, make your own sounds...




    Submitted on 2007-11-09 17:30:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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