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What to do?


Author: sageeriol
ASL Info:    23/male/GA.
Elite Ratio:    3.19 - 314 /322 /106
Words: 76
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
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What to do?


What do you do when your feet fall away
From under you
And you drop into
A nightmare of your own creation?
What do you do when you scream and scream and
Still you cannot hear what you want to say?
What do you do when you are in love
And it seems you are causing your own demise?
What do you do when nothing you ever say
Is the right thing?




Submitted on 2007-11-09 19:19:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  i can relate. sometimes it is hard to know what to do. everything is confusing; nothing makes sense. i thought that it was good. short, simple, and to the point. i did think that it kind of cut off a little early. like there was something more that needed to be said. but then again, maybe that was your intention. anyways, i thought that it was pretty good.
| Posted on 2007-11-10 00:00:00 | by maquiladora | [ Reply to This ]


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