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    dots Submission Name: Allegory of the Planedots
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    Author: 7makaveli
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 36/42/47
    Words: 285
    Class/Type: Story/Misc
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       Each, character represents a school of thought that we use everyday, see if you can figure out what they represent...


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    dotsAllegory of the Planedots
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    Three intellects are walking by a junkyard when a mighty gust of wind transforms the pile of rubble into Boeing 747. The three men come together and try to solve the case of the magical plane.

    Phil: Hmm...this has got me thinking, why did this plane all of the sudden form into such an ideal shape?

    Riley: Don't question it, it's a miracle ! The gust of wind is all knowing, it's amazing what a gift It has blessed us with.

    Sensei: Highly improbable, not credible, we need more evidence!!!

    Riley: Evidence of what? Do you not see it with your own two eyes, it came together like it was meant to be...

    Sensei: How can you be so sure? What if it was a mere coincidence, maybe the sum of the parts evolved from some kind of complex process taking place over a very long period of time?

    Phil: This seems likely, but one must not disregard the flawless design that seems more unearthly than plausible. But look at the rusting parts that serve as its components, it seems this plane had an ideal form in another realm.

    Riley: What triggered it? How did it come to be if it did not have a creator in mind? These major questions you cannot answer, and that is where my reasoning fills the gaps.

    Sensei: Sure, further studies must be done, but I assure you that this trigger you speak of has an impersonal origin with no specific purpose in mind.

    Phil: Well, it seems as we are getting closer and closer to greater to truth, the further we get from truly knowing...




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      i work for boeing, so i HAD to fave this.

    aside from that though, this is a really good, creative piece & i thoroughly enjoyed it.
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by joeyalphabet | [ Reply to This ]


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