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    dots Submission Name: Falling Outdots
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    Author: messiah978
    ASL Info:    28/male/richmon, va
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 0/2/31
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    To Sorrow: Love's Companion

    Caring chaos- clutched cold conclusion,
    Pitch dark dwells, dank depression,
    Helpless heart hurt- hovers in heaps...
    A slumber, silently sorrow, sleeps...
    Tomorrow, today, too long- too late,
    Fearless faithful feelings- falls to fate,
    Love's lullabies, loses lust loathing...
    Kind calculated, kisses killed caringly...
    Sinister sympathy, seared scars sincerely..
    Enticed embraces of eternity, evaporated
    eagerly...
    Lost lovers lay- lonely longing...
    Missed moments, miserable memories-
    mourning...




    Submitted on 2007-11-10 18:46:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Very nice :]
    I see you're new! Welcome to ES :]
    I really liked this part:
    "Missed moments, miserable memories.."

    Keep it up,
    Sofie
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Broken-lands | [ Reply to This ]



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