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    dots Submission Name: My Feelingsdots
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    Author: messiah978
    ASL Info:    28/male/richmon, va
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 0/2/31
    Words: 170
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    you're so graceful- with your soft gentle ways,
    i m confounded in your glanced, i m amazed...
    when i walk near you, i get a head rush
    and when you say "hi" i get a red hot blush,
    i sweat and stutter, when i wanted to say hi,
    and when you wave back i just want to die
    oh oun srey, you are so beautiful i m lost..
    in your deep brown liquid eyes that i cross,
    if only i can take a picture and frame it
    i would stare and sit-wondering as a prophet,
    when your silky smooth hair brush by
    standing in the hallway i sniff with shut eyes,
    your sweet smell just drive me crazy like a bee,
    to a flower i buzz and want to kiss thee...
    the way you laugh just makes my head flutter,
    sitting near you in class-i melt like butter,
    until the day i can be true, with how i feel
    at least the frendship that we have is real....




    Submitted on 2007-11-10 19:28:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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