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    dots Submission Name: The Deepest Paindots
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    Author: messiah978
    ASL Info:    28/male/richmon, va
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 0/2/31
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
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    The Deepest Pain

    a scream that cry with anger in my head...
    like the blood that runs hot red,
    it is a dark deep pain like a bruise,
    under the surface clots and fused,
    never hurts only when reminded...
    especially in nearness i find,
    so tender my flesh feelings shutters...
    the agony is so harsh it thunders...
    thru my soul i cradle in myself
    with slow paced deep breathe...
    i struggle to forget my lovely pain,
    like a wound that was stained...
    in my soft silken heart with dyes
    soaked deep in the windows of eyes...
    rock and shake to sleep-wake,
    my lost sadden soul wouldn't break...
    shut out harsh light tender aches...
    remnants in pieces of burnt state,
    i moan in melody of pulsed throbs...
    as the deepest pain won't stop...




    Submitted on 2007-11-10 19:51:44     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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