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    dots Submission Name: I Want You Happy dots
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    Author: amrslamr
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 18/18/16
    Words: 84
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       After the breakup.


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    dotsI Want You Happy dots
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    Sure, it feels odd, seeing you here, her on your arm
    Knowing you're with her 'cause she's the opposite of me
    Sure I get scared, here in this house, alone in the dark
    'Cause even in silence you were here with me.

    But I want you happy, I want you whole again
    And it's healing me to see it happenin'.
    Sure it feels bad being the one who decided to leave.
    But I want you happy, so I can forgive me.




    Submitted on 2007-11-10 19:52:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sure I get scared, here in this house, alone in the dark
    'Cause even in silence you were here with me.

    MAn, I know how that is...an empty house can seem like the scariest thing in the world when you're used to having that person there.

    I like this.

    At first, it sort of sounded like they were the one that left. I'm kind of glad that you admitted that you were.

    Good write.
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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