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    dots Submission Name: One Thing in Florida dots
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    Author: amrslamr
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 18/18/16
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    Description:
       Song to a loved one.


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    dotsOne Thing in Florida dots
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    They say that Florida's nice this year
    The weather's good the skies are clear
    I hear the waters are calm and warm
    A lotta things I could go there for
    But there's just one thing in Florida
    That I want to see or do
    There's just one thing in Florida
    Baby, that's you.

    I hear they got a rocket place
    Where they could blast me into space
    But I don't wanna see the stars
    I just wanna be where you are
    'Cause there's just one thing in Florida
    That I want to see or do
    There's just one thing in Florida
    Baby, that's you.

    Animals they got 'em there,
    Alligators everywhere
    Orange blossoms on the air
    And sunset ocean views

    There's never been a ride to make me
    Dizzy like your kisses do
    I know that I should want to see
    A lot more than I do...

    'But there's just one thing in Florida
    That I want to see or do
    There's just one thing in Florida
    Baby, that's you.




    Submitted on 2007-11-10 20:00:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      These lyrics are fresh and real, completely original and sweet. You did a fantastic job capturing the emotion and the sincerity of love. Great write!
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by black_beauty18 | [ Reply to This ]
      There's never been a ride to make me
    Dizzy like your kisses do

    I LOVE that...

    This is great...makes me want to go to Florida, too!

    What an awesome person this must be that you're writing about!
    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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