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    dots Submission Name: Don't Give Up on Medots
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    Author: amrslamr
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 18/18/16
    Words: 106
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 544
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    Description:
       Song to remind you that someone is looking for you. Don't give up before they can find you.


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    dotsDon't Give Up on Medots
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    Don't give up on me.
    Don't give up on me.
    Don't give up on me,
    'Cause I'm gonna find you

    If you're feeling lonely, love,
    And want to settle down,
    Please don't settle for someone
    Just because she is around.

    'Cause I've been working on myself
    To be the best I can.
    But I don't want to find you when you're
    Someone else's man

    So don't give up on me.
    Don't give up on me.
    Don't give up on me,
    'Cause I'm gonna find you.

    If it's the last thing that I do
    I won't give up on you.




    Submitted on 2007-11-10 20:03:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      mmm. I know what this is like accept for the the fact that i'd have the switch the gender around so I wouldn't be gay. This reminds me of someone...
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      Well, I like it. Very pretty. I can hear it in my head too...seems like one of the songs I would put on a mix c.d. for my latest infatuation.

    I particularly liked this:

    If you're feeling lonely, love,
    And want to settle down,
    Please don't settle for someone
    Just because she is around.


    | Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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