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    dots Submission Name: White Rosedots
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    Author: messiah978
    ASL Info:    28/male/richmon, va
    Elite Ratio:    1.96 - 0/2/31
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 75
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsWhite Rosedots
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    Dedicated To My Love: Ivy

    With a roving glance, glimpsed a white fleshy petal...
    soft and milky, the texture of skin tasteful to these orbs-
    Concentrating on the luscious green stem, lean and gentle;
    Pierced by the sharp thorns, dangerously, became absorbed...
    veins pulsating to be brushed, silky smooths to the touch-
    Tracing sheets of white, collecting moisture with finger tips;
    Lukewarm, the droplets settled on the finger pads, with such-
    Greeted kiss of a natural and familiar curved lips;
    Urgency to breathe, this fresh perfume aroma, with delicacy-
    Inhaling slowly the fragrance, sent arousalment and intoxication...
    sensing the essence, through the nerves of my body;
    Exhaling with deliberateness, in a state of floating sensation...
    shading the light from sight- imaging the tangible smell-
    Enjoying the scent for a short eternity, locked in memory;
    Tasting distinct fumes- caressed the tongue- as chest rose and fell...
    salivation flooded the mouth with hunger- wanting; empty......




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