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    Author: Cricket
    ASL Info:    19/F/Texas
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 81/51/27
    Words: 99
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Lies telling of so much you'll never see

    Truth of happiness that wasn't meant to be

    Thoughts of past that keep one from dreaming

    Reality harsh enough to make the other begin screaming

    Come hither lets begin reminiscing about our futile tries

    Gaze into empty souls swallow up the countless lies

    Confusion continually fills the abyss with silence

    Nothing can we blame for this hate or our violence

    I promise you this forever and always I will love you till never

    Forgiveness has no part within this hate lasts forever




    Submitted on 2007-11-11 03:05:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ouch talk about a requiem of pain
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by littlepoet | [ Reply to This ]


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