Great job summing up your thoughts so simply. I'm so long winded when it comes to what I feel but you opened your mind with a few words. I leaves me wondering what inspired it though.
I like the way you decided to write this, beginning with a word and describing it using what you feel. You keep it very simple, which is good. However, I think that there is more here...more of a story to tell.
My favorite lines were
"Sleep….
Where good dreams and memories haunt
Awake….
Where the deception and all the lies taunt"
There is so much truth there...when one sleeps one dreams, maybe not always of good memories, but of imaginative times of happiness, and when awaken its back to reality, back to what could at times be a [censored] of living.
Makes me think of all the times Ive been woekn up from an amazing dream, and then wishing I could keep sleeping to retrieve it...
Submission Name: Love and Death
