Wow this says a lot without too many unnecessary words and you really get your point across...i think i like this most of all because i can relate to what you have written throughout and i think most people have been heart broken enough at one time or another to understand how it feels to think you dont want to go on without that special person in your life anymore..keep writing...(stormyskies on behalf of paul/his father)
Dang! That's a heavy ending, Dean! Not that there's anything wrong with that, lol. It just really hit me. As I'm sure it was supposed to.
I've never seen an example of the one-word lead-in like that, but I like the way you used it. I might as well admit right now I'll be trying to use it. It's very effective, and not so flowery as I tend to get sometimes.
Thank you. And thank you for the encouragement you give on my writings. It's much appreciated, my friend. amrslamr (anna)
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