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My Life


Author: MysterydarkPoet
ASL Info:    20/f/Aust
Elite Ratio:    3.13 - 157 /295 /173
Words: 86
Class/Type: Poetry /Serious
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its not finished... ill keep coming back to it.. so if you like it.. bookmark it or something cause im gonna keep changing it..


My Life


Look into my soul
Believe what your told
You're only a cardboard cutout
of a hero i once loved

I'll dream these dreams
And sew up the seams
Hiding the details while
You skim read my biography

Hoist the sails
And travel down my paths
Take my shoes and with all precision
Tell me I should have treated them better

When you've been there
When you've seen it
When you've done it
When you've lived it
Tell me then
How you know better




Submitted on 2007-11-11 04:23:35     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it.I like it a lot.It gives the sense of a journey that we have all had.Or are coming close to.You know everyones always wanting to tell you what they know.BUT what they know and have done will never be the EXACT same to what you have done.Excelleny poem though.Thanks for the read.

the girl who cried wolf
| Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]


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