wow.....i really felt a connection with this piece and the idea that life moves in circles, and that the old man was waiting patiently for the next adventure. the description of the old man is really good and i liked the fact that you seem to have a fascination with the sea.....who wants something that can be tamed? good point!
I agree with Jen Flynn
I thought this was extremely touching
I too have a Love affair with the Ocean and anything water
I believe water has a cleansing effect that restores one to the Happiness they had before depression tryed her hardest to intervene
Again Excellent Job!!!
I Look forward to reading more from you in the future
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think