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    dots Submission Name: Their pastdots
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    Author: Broken-lands
    ASL Info:    13/female/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 22/34/32
    Words: 64
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 87
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 415



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    They looked so nice, so pretty, so cute, so peaceful. Until that day came, the day when the brother killed, and his brother cried.
    By the look on their eyes, there was hate in his, but love in his brothers.
    That's why he let him live, but at the same time giving his brother a goal.

    ~




    Submitted on 2007-11-11 14:51:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this reminds me of sasuke and itachi, it just does! i love it!
    | Posted on 2007-11-22 00:00:00 | by Tomo | [ Reply to This ]
      You know I had to read this write a couple of times to let the full effect sink in
    I may be wrong here but I believe this write was based on child abuse and how the older brother didnt want to see his younger brother wind up hurt like him
    Like I said I may be wrong but that was the sentiment I got from this write
    I have worked with many abused children as a big brother and I know the pain can be unbearablke and I also know sadly the pain truly never ends
    Thank You for sharing this very important write
    God Bless
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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