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    dots Submission Name: Her love for themdots
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    Author: Broken-lands
    ASL Info:    13/female/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 22/34/32
    Words: 34
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 83
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 256



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    dotsHer love for themdots
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    Joy, oh how much she longed for that feeling.
    She knew them, but never saw them.
    She smiled at them but cried for and with them.

    ~




    Submitted on 2007-11-11 14:59:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow..this could be towards love, religon, friendship, or whatever it sounds wonderful!
    | Posted on 2007-11-22 00:00:00 | by Tomo | [ Reply to This ]
      Joy, oh how much she longed for that feeling.


    God, don't we all...



    She knew them, but never saw them.


    Did she feel them? I love this line...


    She smiled at them but cried for and with them.


    She seems to be a tad bit omnipotent. If I were a religious person, I might think this was about some sort of god...nevertheless, it is beautiful.
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]



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