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    dots Submission Name: I Am What I Amdots
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    Author: Drow_dancer04
    ASL Info:    18/female/Mukilteo,WA
    Elite Ratio:    1.99 - 1/2/8
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Poetry/Happy
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       First poem that I wrote this last year... love it!


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    I am what I am, I am Teresa Lenae Knapp. I am a southpaw, a dreamer, a thinker, a storyteller. I have an imagination and I know how to use it. Dreaming, thinking, and telling… it’s what I do best. I am what I am. I think what I think, and I dream my own dreams.
    If one must tell, talk, or present, then one must know what to say and how to say it. I can paint with my spoken words, now I must paint with my written words. I’m getting better, but one who is “sick” must come to a doctor, that’s why I’m here.
    I am what I am. A southpaw, a lefty, a person who is in her “right” mind…don’t look down on me, I’m different, I’m weird , I know and I’m proud of it. Please, don’t try and change me, I am what I am.
    “All is fair in love and war…” I try to tell and write about all things, equally, but I don’t. I like problems; and people working through them. Some are normal; some are strange, get over it. I am what I am. I have many stories and scenarios running around in my head. Some will end up here on the page, and some will never leave. I know, I’m just like that, I am what I am, so don’t try and make me anything else. You can make me more, but not different.




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      /siiigggghhhhh so true. =P


    The title always reminds me of a quote from a character by the name of Vlad Taltos (from the series, The Vlad Taltos Novels, which you should read...) and it goes, "I am what I am, in addition to what I was." And I can definitely relate to the idea that writing is the doctor to one's 'sickness.' Couples with athletics in my case but it still applies. Whenever I read that last line, "You can make me more, but not different" I always think it should read "You can make me more but not less" but I thought about it for a while and your way of using 'different' is a much deeper and more meaningful way of phrasing what yer trying to get across. I really really like that part.


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    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Zai | [ Reply to This ]



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