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Let Go

Author: Dying Young
ASL Info:    18 / F / Lebanon
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Words: 144
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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Let Go

Each time I look up at the sky
Its blueness turns to grey
That’s how I realize
I don’t want you stay

I want you out of my life
Just like you did to the others
You threw them out
So you can own all the corners

All the amorous sights we’ve seen
All the joy we used to feel
Were just flood of tears
The only time I wasn’t deceiving
When I said: “I don’t give a shit if you’re leaving”

But you kept hanging on, you didn’t believe me
It’s your fault; don’t say I’ve played you
You do know I’ve always prayed to
Have you gone away
Where you don’t get to see the light of the day

And that’s the price you’re going to pay
For not letting go as you know you’ll stray

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