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" Join You In Death "

Author: Dying Young
ASL Info:    18 / F / Lebanon
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Words: 138
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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This one is about a mother who killed herself when she found out her newborn didn't get the chance to open his eyes to the world...

" Join You In Death "

A part of her vanished out of blue
His voice still resounds in her head
“Carry on I’m still with you”

In that voice she have found the strength she needed
To rebind her soul with his again … just like the old times
She knows he can feel all the bloody tears she sheds
But what’s the point if he is not in her laps

Victim of the cruelty of fate,
She keeps standing at the same spot
Where he breathed his last
As well as his first …

My son, she said with her eyes closed tight
There’s nothing for me to do since you’ve left
Nothing but to join you in death
Then she opened those eyes
However, she missed the scene
Where red covers the screen

Submitted on 2007-11-12 05:18:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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