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Pain Addiction

Author: Dying Young
ASL Info:    18 / F / Lebanon
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Some people just walk away leave scars behind them... and don't even think that their leaving would crumble someone's world !!!

Pain Addiction

You walked into my life to make me whole
Just when I thought it won’t happen again
And now I’m seeking to fill the hole
You’ve left in your way out of the door

You turned your back with billion questions on my mind
Was it too much asking about the reason why?
How much more can I handle those wondering voices?
How much longer till they blow my head?

I locked my feelings in behind a mask of carelessness
Preventing the situation from getting scandalous
Giving away shadowed laughs and broken smiles
To keep scars from your departure out of sight

Somehow we had to come to an end
And I haven’t gave you from my own yet
Alone… nothing but memories to darken my days
Nothing, not even a goodbye to kill me over again

A cry for pity vanishes in the sky of struggle
Smoldering my eyes with tears of sorrow
Moving from an addiction to another… today it’s pain
That I’m afraid of being truly happy.

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