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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 23
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 724
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    the world around me
    that was once all i knew
    is fading so quickly
    now all i see is you





    Submitted on 2007-11-12 13:23:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow, this poem is what I'd call obsessive. I should know, I am the biggest obsessor in the world with this guy I like. But, your poem was excellente. I wish I could get all my emotions out through a small poem such as you did. I'm jealous of your writing, but you need to write another!!!
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:00:00 | by jasonsanctuary | [ Reply to This ]
      peek-a-boo you. poe
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]
      hey hi long time this was short and simple but a very good statement for someone or to someone
    hope all is good

    sandman
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by sandman | [ Reply to This ]


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