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    dots Submission Name: Shelter Medots
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    Author: Peachpitt
    ASL Info:    26/F/away from you
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 107/144/72
    Words: 131
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 1074
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    dotsShelter Medots
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    Here I am alone with you
    Quietly I talk to you
    You said the truth would set me free
    So here I am surrendering
    I know I can let your promises by my hope

    Im safe, cause you love me
    Safe, all because of your name
    It has power to calm the ocean
    When everything changes, Im safe

    My heart is overflowing
    With peace beyond all knowing
    This love is deep, it shelters me
    Im safe within your reach
    I know I can let your promises be my hope

    Even though my heart is breaking
    I know that you are mine
    So I let you see into me
    You hold me in your hand
    My heart is on my sleeve
    I know im safe and you understand




    Submitted on 2007-11-12 16:07:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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