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    dots Submission Name: Freedom Will Ringdots
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    Author: numbertwenty
    ASL Info:    16 Female
    Elite Ratio:    1.41 - 55/25/9
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 808
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 958



    Description:
       We're doing a perseverance unit in AP English 3 and it focuses on the perseverance the slaves had with escaping. I was assigned to write a poem about a slave. So here it is. It may not flow as well as I would have liked, but I had to fit a number of requirements. So, I hope you enjoy. :)


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    Fingers laced together and head bent, she prays.
    Her faith in God is as strong as the hands that lash the whip across her back.
    The hot sun burning her, the empty stomach hurting her, the bloody whip deforming her,
    She prays for easier days.

    Eyes closed in the middle of the night, she dreams.
    Her dreams of freedom are as vivid as the stars she sees behind her eyelids when she falls to the floor in exhaustion.
    The hot sun burning her, the empty stomach hurting her, the bloody whip deforming her.
    She dreams for a day when freedom will ring.

    When she raises with the morning crickets, she walks.
    Her strength sturdier than the toughest slab of cowskin.
    She walks to the fields knowing that the hot sun will burn her, her empty stomach will hurt her, and the bloody whip will deform her,
    Because one day, like in her prayers and dreams, freedom will ring.




    Submitted on 2007-11-12 16:27:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      You got your point across rather well and I think everyone who reads this will have a soft place in their heart for this one?
    Great write! Thanks for making us all see how far we all have come in such a short time.

    Kelley Frost

    P.S. I have a poem called "Inside Beauty"
    You might like to read it if you get a chance.
    | Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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