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    dots Submission Name: The wall in betweendots
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    Author: Broken-lands
    ASL Info:    13/female/here
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 22/34/32
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 114
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1259



    Description:
       I'm supposed to be studying Biology! o.o
    I better go, I know it's crappy.. but I only had less then 10 mins if i wanted to study without my mother realizing i was in the computer
    :] i got inspired with that image :D
    but i got confused and thought the girl was the one that was down.. uh. well my bad :P
    byee! i gotta run xP


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    dotsThe wall in betweendots
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    ~

    There is a wall in between us,
    there is a wall in between it all.
    There is one surrounding the world
    from the outside, being the space.
    There's another one that protects us
    from the outside.

    There's a thin wall between you and me
    when we are in different rooms.
    But that is enormous compared to the
    one that is between good and evil.

    That one is so thin you can be a devil
    only by hating someone.
    And when will that not be normal?
    When we live in a world full of hate.

    There's a thin line called border,
    it is so thin, people can kill you if
    you cross it one time.
    People can hate you just because you
    live on the other side of that little thing.

    There's this small wall on top of me,
    it is so thin I can feel your lips on me.
    Your lips are touching the floor,
    while mine's are touching the roof.

    There's no such thing at in between,
    you are here or you are there.
    That sadly is the world we live in.

    ~




    Submitted on 2007-11-12 16:30:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      there is so much meaning in this poem because you can connect it with just about anything
    | Posted on 2007-11-22 00:00:00 | by Tomo | [ Reply to This ]
      cool
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]
      I really enjoyed this and it made a lot of sense to me, You are very descriptive
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:00:00 | by forfila | [ Reply to This ]
      hi, very good, i like it "That sadly is the world we live in."
    killer line. poe
    | Posted on 2007-11-12 00:00:00 | by poetotoe | [ Reply to This ]



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