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    dots Submission Name: Oh. Oh Honey.dots
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    Author: Xx_bang_bang_
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 23/24/19
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 184
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1054



    Description:
       Submitted 13-11-2007.


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    dotsOh. Oh Honey.dots
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    Oh
    Oh honey didn't you think?
    Didn't you think that it would hurt?
    To break my heart like crystal
    And watch the sun shine off the shards

    You're the devil here
    Not a beast in hell
    To tie me up in your cold eyes
    and never cut me down

    Oh
    Oh honey, didn't it feel good?
    To drive the blade into my back
    And feast on the betrayal.

    Your touch has ever boy and girl begging for more
    You give the taste before you turn and say no

    Oh
    Oh honey didn't it feel swell?
    To have me wrapped around your finger
    and be the cause for my own hell
    To watch me fall in love with you
    And love you all in vain

    Oh-oh honey
    I thought nightmares were just for sleep
    Oh-oh honey
    I thought demons were just a myth
    Oh-oh honey
    Heartbreak never felt this bad
    Oh-oh honey
    You're the girl I could never be





    Submitted on 2007-11-13 04:36:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Sad, but well written.
    I liked It. M.
    | Posted on 2007-11-13 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]



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