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    dots Submission Name: To the roof.dots

    Author: tryst
    Elite Ratio:    2.48 - 8/20/16
    Words: 79
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 503
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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       This piece just kinda flowed, I'm not sure where it came from, but I wish I could write this easily more often, it took less than five minutes to put it all together.

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    dotsTo the roof.dots

    I'm not quite to the roof,
    but I've already fallen,
    I do what I must,
    I'm one of the chosen,

    I've run out of reasons,
    to fail yet again,
    so I'll be successful,
    bringing life to an end,

    I step forward once more,
    plant foot firmly on air,
    and continue walk,
    they look up in despair,

    As I fall to the ground,
    I close my eyes and smile,
    I can overcome failure,
    once in a while.

    Submitted on 2007-11-14 02:19:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This was a great poem Ryan!
    But I think this stanza needs a little work?

    "I step forward once more,
    plant foot firmly on air,
    and continue walk,
    they look up in despair,"

    I maybe wrong?
    Love your work!!! Keep it up
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]

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