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    dots Submission Name: Haunted Shoredots

    Author: Algol46
    ASL Info:    200/m/East of Eden
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 1111/1235/613
    Words: 132
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsHaunted Shoredots

    Hard by this island the ghost ship steers ever,
    In Winter, in Summer, in high tide or low,
    Long has it sought to sever, dissever,
    From that wrecked vessel sunk so far below.

    There in the twilight stars glimmer golden,
    The ghost crew looks skyward with eyeless eyes,
    There at moonrise their spirits embolden,
    Then their last hours they once more reprise.

    Hard on the sand the sea foam is scattered
    There, over against those tall standing stones,
    Here where their ship was long ago shattered,
    There sprawled the timbers and sad bleaching bones.

    Hard by this island the ghost ship steers ever,
    In Winter, in Summer, in high tide or low,
    Long has it sought to sever, dissever,
    From that wrecked vessel sunk so far below.

    Submitted on 2007-11-14 15:19:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like this,...really captures the scenery
    | Posted on 2007-12-01 00:00:00 | by iaida | [ Reply to This ]
      This had a old english feel to it. I like how it fkowed and the stanzas were perfect.
    Great write! Thanks for sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-26 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it! You could almost write a story about this poem. I like the "eyeless eyes" part the best. Great imagery as well.
    | Posted on 2007-11-14 00:00:00 | by fate_s nemisis | [ Reply to This ]

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