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    dots Submission Name: The Way She Looks At Medots
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    Author: kession
    ASL Info:    18~M~ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 115/156/63
    Words: 458
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
    Total Views: 831
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2764



    Description:
       this is just a little song im working on


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    dotsThe Way She Looks At Medots
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    It's the way she looks at me,
    the way she makes my heart beat fast,
    the way with just one touch,
    she can make me lose my breath.

    She's an angel here on earth,
    as far as I can see,
    I'm just glad she chose,
    to walk along side of me.

    Her eyes are like diamonds,
    oh how they shine,
    her skin's like velvet,
    so soft and fine.

    I love the way she says she loves me,
    with a voice so soft and sweet,
    I love how with just one touch,
    she can bring me to my knees.

    It's the way she looks at me,
    the way she makes my heart beat fast,
    the way with just one touch,
    she can make me lose my breath.

    She's an angel here on earth,
    as far as I can see,
    I'm just glad she chose,
    to walk along side of me.

    It's the way she wakes me,
    in the morning with a kiss,
    there's just no way,
    I can resist her sweet lips.

    It's the way she plans our life together,
    all the way from now till forever,
    and when I'm sad she holds me tight,
    and tells me everything will be alright.

    It's the way she looks at me,
    the way she makes my heart beat fast,
    the way with just one touch,
    she can make me lose my breath.

    She's an angel here on earth,
    as far as I can see,
    I'm just glad she chose,
    to walk along side of me.

    It's the way she talks about,
    wanting a ring on her finger,
    the way she talks about,
    never wanting another.

    It's the way she curls up next to me,
    every night when we sleep,
    the way she lays her head on my shoulder,
    and I can feel her breathe.

    It's the way she looks at me,
    the way she makes my heart beat fast,
    the way with just one touch,
    she can make me lose my breath.

    She's an angel here on earth,
    as far as I can see,
    I'm just glad she chose,
    to walk along side of me.

    It's the way I see my future in her eyes,
    the way I never want to say goodbye,
    the way I never want you to leave,
    the way I want you to always be by my side.

    It's the way she looks at me,
    the way she makes my heart beat fast,
    the way with just one touch,
    she can make me lose my breath.

    She's an angel here on earth,
    as far as I can see,
    I'm just glad she chose,
    to walk along side of me.





    Submitted on 2007-11-14 17:22:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      She's an angel here on earth,
    as far as I can see,
    I'm just glad she chose,
    to walk along side of me

    Soooooo pretty!


    I bet this brings tears to her eyes if she ever gets to see it...

    | Posted on 2007-11-14 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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