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    dots Submission Name: Future Unkowndots
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    Author: Mykquillion
    ASL Info:    20/M/NEB
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 109/124/41
    Words: 11
    Class/Type: Haiku/Longing
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    dotsFuture Unkowndots
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    Forever yearning,
    For deeper understanding;
    Forecast tells nothing.





    Submitted on 2007-11-14 20:14:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is excellent
    People alwaysd yell at me when I write Haikus that it is not a True Haiku because its not about Nature in general
    I so strongly disagree with that statement
    I believe what you are saying in your words is enjoy your Youth and learn all you can during it
    Because once youth is over you will spend the rest of your life trying to recapture it
    But the lessons learned during your youth will carry you forward
    Excellent Write!!!
    I really like how this write made me think deeper then I normally would
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-14 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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