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Submission Name:
Meekly Shriek (Black Feathers)
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Author:
fate_s nemisis
ASL Info:
19/male/Flint, MI
Elite Ratio:
5.71 - 29/11/6
Words:
108
Class/Type:
Poetry/Alone
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Read it aloud with a horse, sinister voice to get the full force of this one! (or don't)
Meekly Shriek (Black Feathers)
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Errode... Corrode... all that contains;
The cavity... it echoes... only screaming remains.
My thoughts: no words, my insides melt;
Just screaming... no dreaming... my throat gurtles and smelts.
So meekly... just shrieking... shattered witts;
Though reading... or speaking, I'm in biblical fits.
All my expressions: deceptions
Hope:Never shattered but trapped and slowly digested.
Dissolve... Evolve... Let trueness unfold.
Let insides... come out; turth finally be told.
To find; align with who I am;
To a place; a space let me find my own land,
That lives... and forgives... my black feathered wings
To belong... get along... with other living things...
Submitted on 2007-11-15 00:09:19
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Interesting and very intriguing... neat and nifty and different... I liked it a great dead! bravo... bravo... bravo... (you suggested that I read Poe's "MS Found In A Bottle", I have, as well as most of Poe's fiction... he was one of a kind...
| Posted on 2007-11-15 00:00:00 | by
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