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    dots Submission Name: Meekly Shriek (Black Feathers)dots
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    Author: fate_s nemisis
    ASL Info:    19/male/Flint, MI
    Elite Ratio:    5.71 - 29/11/6
    Words: 108
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 175
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    dotsMeekly Shriek (Black Feathers)dots
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    Errode... Corrode... all that contains;
    The cavity... it echoes... only screaming remains.

    My thoughts: no words, my insides melt;
    Just screaming... no dreaming... my throat gurtles and smelts.

    So meekly... just shrieking... shattered witts;
    Though reading... or speaking, I'm in biblical fits.

    All my expressions: deceptions
    Hope:Never shattered but trapped and slowly digested.

    Dissolve... Evolve... Let trueness unfold.
    Let insides... come out; turth finally be told.

    To find; align with who I am;
    To a place; a space let me find my own land,

    That lives... and forgives... my black feathered wings
    To belong... get along... with other living things...




    Submitted on 2007-11-15 00:09:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Interesting and very intriguing... neat and nifty and different... I liked it a great dead! bravo... bravo... bravo... (you suggested that I read Poe's "MS Found In A Bottle", I have, as well as most of Poe's fiction... he was one of a kind...
    | Posted on 2007-11-15 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]



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