the sentiments expressed in this piece are nice its odd when you realise that you have lived for so long without something that now seems vital to your very existance.
and love is like that.
when you can look at someone and ask yourself how you got to this point in your life without them while at the same time your mind jumps forward to forever and every plan/dream you can see for your future has this person in it.
while we mostly write for self expression and this certainly reaches that end i kinda wanna encourage you to try have a play round with presentation a little... try to find some magically uniquely yours and hers imagery to go in this... make it personal... something only you and her will understand in places.
maybe try to find a different way of saying 'i never really knew' because the repetition of this line gets a little hard to read as the piece progresses. while it is true that there are a million things you prolly didnt know you could maybe find another way of saying it?
Very Nicely Said
Love has a way of creating its own Happiness
If this write reflects on the truth then I think you have found it my Friend
Me Personally in all of my 39 years I have never found Love as in a relationship
But to be honest with youI Honestly think I am afraid of it because I have seen so m,any relationships end in pain
I Hope you find the Happiness you are Looking for
In this write I can easilly see you are well on your way
God Bless
Ron
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
Thank You
Ron
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its odd when you realise that you have lived for so long without something that now seems vital to your very existance.