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    dots Submission Name: Goodnight, X Odots
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    Author: Kaygrl
    ASL Info:    26/female/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.43 - 162/239/241
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsGoodnight, X Odots
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    I’m blowing you a kiss,
    So catch it when it comes,
    In case you didn’t know,
    You set me heart all aglow,

    You make me so warm inside,
    Like fuzzy winter socks,
    And when you say goodnight,
    It really really rocks,

    Sleep tight,
    Dream light,
    and think of me tonight,
    Then wake up in the morning,
    with a smile on your face,
    Goodnight, x o




    Submitted on 2007-11-15 11:09:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem would have to be one of the cutest poems I've ever read! I really liked how you compared feeling warm inside and fuzzy winter socks... great comparison! This one is getting added to my favs.

    Britt
    | Posted on 2007-12-12 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]


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