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Submission Name: Take The Bass Line Out dots

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Author:	always_confused
ASL Info:	16/F
Elite Ratio:	1.69 - 4/9/21
Words:	45

Class/Type:	Poetry/Misc
Total Views:	137
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	356

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Take The Bass Line Out dots

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listening to one thing
hearing echos of millions
too much to focus
the mind races to catch up
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apple picking
backwoods boy
fairytale princess
yes, no, & maybe
floating
read it again
almost there
proving them wrong
somewhere, someplace
it is what it is

Submitted on 2007-11-15 15:46:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Very nice concept.

I like how you describe the mess you see in front of you, and then give those few examples. But im not quite sure what you do after, not quite sure what the ending is. Is it acceptance that the world is esentially the mess you describe, but somewhere you will find what it is you're looking for?

That could be completely off, but that's what I got from it. I like almost everything, though the ending is a bit confusing. good piece.
| Posted on 2007-11-15 00:00:00 | by Maybe | [ Reply to This ]

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