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    dots Submission Name: Don't push dots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1236
    Average Vote:    2.0000
    Bytes: 624



    Description:
       thinking of our last talk


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    dotsDon't push dots
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    Don't push you say
    Good bye and let go!

    Well easier said then done
    my friend.

    How easy was it for you!

    When you didn't want to
    let go & just hold on?

    Don't push you say
    I may still be your friend.

    Don't push you say
    I may even talk to you some day.

    Well my friendship never end's
    and my love is eternal.

    So you my friend will never again
    be pushed away.

    Don't push I say
    I'll get to you my own way!




    Submitted on 2007-11-15 21:45:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hey Makisha, I like this one even better. Keep it up. I'll keep reading them.

    Carm
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by goodcarmacurley | [ Reply to This ]


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