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    dots Submission Name: And somedots

    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsAnd somedots

    I canít bare the pain
    Life is so long
    I canít bare the pain
    The only one
    What I give for
    A clouded sun
    To see it trough these eyes
    To know that im alive
    Free your mind
    Then walk away
    I can't beleive in nothing
    Hoping to be fine now
    Where to go now?
    Where did you go now my friend?
    Where can i fall now?
    Forget about the way i am.

    Submitted on 2007-11-16 06:16:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      cool poem. u must believe in something to get u thru life...

    | Posted on 2007-11-17 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]

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