Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: And somedots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 75
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 613
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 455



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsAnd somedots
    -------------------------------------------


    I canít bare the pain
    Life is so long
    I canít bare the pain
    The only one
    What I give for
    A clouded sun
    To see it trough these eyes
    To know that im alive
    Free your mind
    Then walk away
    I can't beleive in nothing
    Hoping to be fine now
    Where to go now?
    Where did you go now my friend?
    Where can i fall now?
    Forget about the way i am.





    Submitted on 2007-11-16 06:16:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      cool poem. u must believe in something to get u thru life...



    peace
    | Posted on 2007-11-17 00:00:00 | by darkness | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    152987

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    In My Head written by faideddarkness
    Linger written by saartha
    Incubus written by monad
    cleverly shunned written by CrypticBard
    Skin of Fables written by ShadowParadox
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Red Barn written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    untitled written by Chelebel
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Our Cinder Crisis written by SavedDragon
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    You Make Me speechless written by elephantasia
    In the end written by Janesaddiction
    Ten Poems written by Wolfwatching
    Summer Nights written by ollie_wicked
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    Date night written by expiring_touch
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Trails written by Daniel Barlow
    This written by Chelebel
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Bond written by saartha
    May 31 2018 written by Chelebel

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry