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    dots Submission Name: Goddots
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    Author: moises ruiz
    Elite Ratio:    0.65 - 1/2/7
    Words: 87
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
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    dotsGoddots
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    We know you love each and every one
    At least, thats Sunday school concept
    Sits deep in our memory files.
    But unconditional love
    Is not a simple concept to grasp
    We are tempted to point out the unfair acts
    Against us and wonder
    how heavens mercy can extend
    to someone who obviously
    Doesn’t deserve it
    Then we are reminds by some still,
    Small voice inside us that we, too,
    Are undeserving in many ways.




    Submitted on 2007-11-16 11:12:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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