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    dots Submission Name: Hesterdots
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    Author: whispered_chaos
    ASL Info:    15/f./cincinnati ohio
    Elite Ratio:    6.8 - 151/94/48
    Words: 265
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 78
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 2086



    Description:
       well, my friend pointed out that this reminds her of Pearl from The Scarlet Letter.....

    It's one of the things that I was thinking of when I wrote it, so there's the explanation for the title xP


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    dotsHesterdots
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    Her fatal aphrodisiac-
    Her milky pallid skin-
    The rotten fruit falls from her lips,
    her breath grows shrill and thin.

    Aquamarine, her pupils shrink
    whilst ink drips down her face,
    eyelashes silver-
    pricked out one by one,
    fallen at the feet of disgrace.
    Her terror is realized-
    Submission commenced,
    dreams stalk her child-
    She never repents.

    Clawing the soil,
    she clutches a hand-
    Feels colder than marble
    and crumbles like sand.
    Scraping at the foliage,
    unveiling hidden treasure-
    A tiny girl with golden curls;
    her beauty won't be measured.
    She seems an elf by human eyes,
    a spirit that no one must touch-
    But she, so daring,
    trespassing on reverence-
    Caressing the countenance
    she once loved so much.

    Charcoal-burnt upon contact,
    the elvish sprite glistens-
    Curls ashen,
    eyes granite,
    such a ruddy existence.
    Elf's body diminished,
    yea her face doth remain-
    A mask in mother's hands,
    and so comes her pain.

    Bitterly weeping,
    she wretches and moans,
    frantic hunting,
    screaming curses
    in frightful, erratic tones.
    As she finds what she is lacking,
    a smirk runs across her lips.
    The needle shines with scarlet thread
    between her fingertips.

    Patient, ever patient,
    her fingers shut sprite's eyes-
    And finally her dainty mouth,
    No child of hers tells lies!
    The whalebone needle,
    brittle and pale,
    pierces silver flesh-
    Sews up eyelids, lips stitched tight-
    No drop of blood falls fresh.

    'Beloved, my child...'
    She kisses the Elf,
    'Forever untamed and wild!
    Never will I be forgotten of you,
    Such burdensome love undefiled!'






    Submitted on 2007-11-16 14:40:15     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I haven't read the Scarlet Letter yet, but I have the basic idea of it, I think, the whole adultry thing and having to wear the letter on her chest. The last stanza was a perfect end to it. Everything just fit together so perfectly, like a puzzle. Very nice poem.

    *tox*
    | Posted on 2007-11-21 00:00:00 | by Toxic_Rayne | [ Reply to This ]
      oooooooo that was great alex i loved it very much:) it is a dear friend of mine
    seriously i loved it and am very glad u decided to write again
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by SYnesthesiA_WaR | [ Reply to This ]
      wow ok too many posts for one peom that are unnecessary but really dear keep at it uz its amazing..ill shut up now :x
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Northern_light | [ Reply to This ]
      maybe i should write...nah
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Northern_light | [ Reply to This ]
      i meant pearl
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Northern_light | [ Reply to This ]
      i read it..its beautiful dear..reminds me of Pera o and one partiular line..
    eyelashes silver-
    pricked out one by one,

    hmmm remids me of sumone
    its good though:D
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Northern_light | [ Reply to This ]



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