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    dots Submission Name: Loversdots
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    Author: takenspiritwind
    ASL Info:    21/F/NH
    Elite Ratio:    4.35 - 117/95/38
    Words: 14
    Class/Type: Haiku/Misc
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       Just a little haiku I wrote


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    dotsLoversdots
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    A touch that lingers
    love written upon our faces
    we walk with no care




    Submitted on 2007-11-16 16:48:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awesome. I've just recently started seeing someone and reading this haiku made me reach for him. Thanks for the smile.
    | Posted on 2008-01-29 00:00:00 | by kissmystars | [ Reply to This ]
      lol wasn't thinking it's "Cogito, Ergo Sum" lol sorry about that. I don't like mistakes.
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]
      the middle line is the best, i believe. It's a great idea and written text book. But with a new idea. Most haiku are about nature but to take a old idea and give it a new spin is always admired by me. lovely write.





    Cogito Ergo, Sum
    Christopher
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by Soulraven | [ Reply to This ]


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