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    dots Submission Name: NOWHEREdots
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    Author: Dying Young
    ASL Info:    18 / F / Lebanon
    Elite Ratio:    6.16 - 78/34/27
    Words: 184
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 918
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsNOWHEREdots
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    Want to feel apathetic?
    Just drink wine
    Want to forget your sorrow?
    Just hear mine!

    That day, when I've decided to flee
    From the troubles in my life,
    I turned around to see
    No one but me!
    To realize I basically had no life!

    I've been walking with my heartache
    Trying to reach serenity
    But I don't want to live till eternity
    In a time when even peace is fake

    When you're rotting on planet earth
    Avoid dreaming of perfections
    Even saints have made sins
    Don't believe their illusions

    Locations are hard to identify,
    When you live in the world of NOWHERE
    So don't bother, don't even try
    I'm not here, nor there...

    After all I've been forced to test
    I Knew,
    Pain doesn't hurt when it's all you've ever felt

    But still,
    I need a place to rest
    A place where I could run from my faults
    A place that could bear my thoughts

    Where would I find such place?
    It's right there!!
    Somewhere ...
    In the world of NOWHERE




    Submitted on 2007-11-16 17:06:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Quite a treatise on day-dreaming,"I'm not hear....there."
    "....I basically had no life...............in the world of NOWHERE."
    "Im not here..there........where I ..run from.. faults......NOWHERE."
    | Posted on 2007-11-16 00:00:00 | by realpoet | [ Reply to This ]


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