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    dots Submission Name: Kissing in the terracedots
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    Author: anooplokur
    ASL Info:    21/male/india
    Elite Ratio:    2.76 - 73/106/34
    Words: 117
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsKissing in the terracedots
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    Your innocent smile capturing my heart
    Your eyes calling upon me
    Your lips moist like the dew drops on a rose
    As the grey clouds gather around us
    As they rumble and let down
    Silver Droplets of passion
    Falling upon your lovely black hair
    To your feet cold and waiting to be warmed
    Our lips sealed, we kiss in the rain
    We dance in the rain,
    Kiss against the wall
    As the rain falls upon our entangled bodies
    We lay lost and mesmerized in our world
    Our hearts content in bliss
    Our souls drenched in passion
    As we lay
    Kissing in the terrace, under the rain.

    20:43 17 Nov 07




    Submitted on 2007-11-17 03:44:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like this, the title really drew me in. really beautiful imagery you have here. i could actually feel raindrops falling on my face while i read it.

    Good job,
    Jay.
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by Flowerinbloom | [ Reply to This ]
      whoa...sounds sorta like someone is sorta in love, long time no talk!!! glad to see that your still writing though. i like all of your work...just thought you should know....anyways...how come you haven't emailed me back yet...its no big deal just wondering....kisses,marie.

    btw...keep up the great writing!!!!don't ever give it up ok?
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by boo boo | [ Reply to This ]



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