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    dots Submission Name: Hangin With Deathdots
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    Author: oononotthatguy
    ASL Info:    35 M Fernley ,Nv
    Elite Ratio:    5.14 - 48/15/15
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Friendship
    Total Views: 835
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1196



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    dotsHangin With Deathdots
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    Ever felt Death lookin you over? Lookin around, Taking some one you love? The pearcing eyes of some one who is not there?
    The touch, the smile, the arrogance. Felt your
    self put on display?

    Have you ever enjoyed it? Looked back,
    Smiled. Invited Him over? Stright missed his
    company? Ever got Jealous? Wonder why
    you were left out?.........................Reminded?

    Its a thing of understanding. Its a thing of
    Respect. Ya I get a little jealous sometimes.
    I miss that Guy sometimes. I`v seen him sooo
    many times. I knew he was there, I`v looked
    him in His eyes. He let me go. I fell asleep in
    him arms. He let me go.

    There aint nothin like livin. After you`ve been
    hanging with death. Things smell better, They
    taste better.

    There is the real artist. How else could we
    appreciate what we do have, untill we dangle
    on the edge? How else could we walk the line? Its our pain that Refines us, Defines us.
    Turns us into who we realy are. Therefore,
    At least from me Death will have a few props.

    Joshua German




    Submitted on 2007-11-17 14:17:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow you are right this is how you feel affter death hangs out awhile. I liked it. M.
    | Posted on 2007-11-18 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]


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