[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav

  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav

    << | >>

    dots Submission Name: Hangin With Deathdots

    Author: oononotthatguy
    ASL Info:    35 M Fernley ,Nv
    Elite Ratio:    5.14 - 48/15/15
    Words: 194
    Class/Type: Personal Quotes/Friendship
    Total Views: 778
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1196


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsHangin With Deathdots

    Ever felt Death lookin you over? Lookin around, Taking some one you love? The pearcing eyes of some one who is not there?
    The touch, the smile, the arrogance. Felt your
    self put on display?

    Have you ever enjoyed it? Looked back,
    Smiled. Invited Him over? Stright missed his
    company? Ever got Jealous? Wonder why
    you were left out?.........................Reminded?

    Its a thing of understanding. Its a thing of
    Respect. Ya I get a little jealous sometimes.
    I miss that Guy sometimes. I`v seen him sooo
    many times. I knew he was there, I`v looked
    him in His eyes. He let me go. I fell asleep in
    him arms. He let me go.

    There aint nothin like livin. After you`ve been
    hanging with death. Things smell better, They
    taste better.

    There is the real artist. How else could we
    appreciate what we do have, untill we dangle
    on the edge? How else could we walk the line? Its our pain that Refines us, Defines us.
    Turns us into who we realy are. Therefore,
    At least from me Death will have a few props.

    Joshua German

    Submitted on 2007-11-17 14:17:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!

    ||| Comments |||
      wow you are right this is how you feel affter death hangs out awhile. I liked it. M.
    | Posted on 2007-11-18 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]

    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?


    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Estranged / Shocks written by Daniel Barlow
    Your Lover written by Cordell
    True Death written by layDsayD
    Wavelength written by saartha
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    More then just goodbye written by faideddarkness
    written by Daniel Barlow
    AI written by poetotoe
    Neither Here nor There written by layDsayD
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    Bond written by saartha
    Alone in the Crowd written by SavedDragon
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    I will call out your name written by RisingSon
    descent written by TheBadSadMan
    Waiting written by Daniel Barlow
    Once Again written by krs3332003
    written by Daniel Barlow
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    Fasade written by jackz
    102.3 written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Sleep Talk written by Queen_of_spades
    PEARL (Exclusive Poem) 10th Anniversary... written by Cordell
    Before, Now, & After written by SincerWritinAsh
    Supernatural Cowboy Sleuth (7) written by endlessgame23
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Dashboard Light written by layDsayD




    User Name:


    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]

    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]

    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]