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    dots Submission Name: I Remember Your Eyesdots
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    Author: ifwinterends
    ASL Info:    15/F/Dallas
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 8/3/4
    Words: 146
    Class/Type: Prose/Dark
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    Bytes: 794



    Description:
       This is more of a 'what if' piece, however, it came very close to actually happening. I obsess daily over what could have happened if I hadn't reacted as I did...


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    dotsI Remember Your Eyesdots
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    I remember your eyes, the way that they looked--at me, through me, through everything...as if you saw something that would immortalize you as your body would inevitably begin to decay. At first I saw only the blank glassy stare assumed by those whose blood ran impure, but as I saw the crimson pouring freely before me, I realized that this could not possibly be so. I could not watch. I clasped your hand, willing, pleading you to stay, but I averted my eyes all the same. With a flash of silver I realized it was done. I could see your face wrought with pain and defeat, your illustrious hair that had always been a symbol of your undying defiance lay fanned limply around your delicate face. And now as the weight of impurities of my own blood stifles those memories, I remember your eyes.




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      This poem was very nice although I felt like you could have went alittle more into detail when you talked about how it ended... ya know?

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    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]


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