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Hug ( 1 Foot In The Grave )


Author: Dying Young
ASL Info:    18 / F / Lebanon
Elite Ratio:    6.16 - 78 /34 /27
Words: 146
Class/Type: Poetry /Depressed
Total Views: 1300
Average Vote:    4.0000
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Hug ( 1 Foot In The Grave )



Help!!
The hole is getting bigger
I'm in it, and I'm going under
Can't you see?
I keep falling deeper

No!! You can't see me!
Because I've lost my colors
But you can feel me in spite of darkness

Give me a hug my friend,
I'm completely faithless
I really am,
So where is my hug?

Give it to me before I breathe this drug
This bright shinning weed
Give it to me, it's all I need

Pep me up after they've rotten me in misery
Cheer me up because I've started to feel lonely

Here I am,
With one foot in the grave
One foot in the hole
Would you hold me tight, or watch me fall?
Well it doesn't even matter!!!
All I need is one hug
Give it to me,
Then you may flee!!




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  Great Write! Agreed with Glen Bowman its a storyt everyone can remember once in their life!

Buster
| Posted on 2009-11-21 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ]
  I like this one because it tells a story everybody can remember in their own life; and the verse sounds spectacular when read aloud: the reader can really put some energy into it and it is so dramatic!
| Posted on 2008-01-21 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ]
  They don't all flee. Don't ever give up.
Thanks for sharing this great write!
Kelley Frost
| Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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