Hug ( 1 Foot In The Grave )
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Hug ( 1 Foot In The Grave )
Help!! The hole is getting bigger I'm in it, and I'm going under Can't you see? I keep falling deeper No!! You can't see me! Because I've lost my colors But you can feel me in spite of darkness Give me a hug my friend, I'm completely faithless I really am, So where is my hug? Give it to me before I breathe this drug This bright shinning weed Give it to me, it's all I need Pep me up after they've rotten me in misery Cheer me up because I've started to feel lonely Here I am, With one foot in the grave One foot in the hole Would you hold me tight, or watch me fall? Well it doesn't even matter!!! All I need is one hug Give it to me, Then you may flee!! |
Submitted on 2007-11-17 16:11:07 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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| Great Write! Agreed with Glen Bowman its a storyt everyone can remember once in their life! Buster | Posted on 2009-11-21 00:00:00 | by BusterLILblock | [ Reply to This ] | I like this one because it tells a story everybody can remember in their own life; and the verse sounds spectacular when read aloud: the reader can really put some energy into it and it is so dramatic! | | Posted on 2008-01-21 00:00:00 | by Glen Bowman | [ Reply to This ] | They don't all flee. Don't ever give up. | Thanks for sharing this great write! Kelley Frost | Posted on 2007-11-29 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ] | |
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