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    dots Submission Name: Paralyzeddots
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    Author: the_truth
    ASL Info:    15/f/usa
    Elite Ratio:    3.87 - 25/21/21
    Words: 150
    Class/Type: Poetry/
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    17th of November 2007

    Paralyzed

    Numbness in my corrupt form
    Trying to move
    Something I wish not to perform
    Nothing to prove

    A satisfied smirk on your face
    My futile exertion
    Provoking my foolish disgrace
    Needing a desertion

    A black abyss slowly near Paralyzed
    Shattering a must
    Not letting you see my fear
    You a disgust

    Accursed words attack me deeper
    Silence a dream
    Which I will get in eternal sleep
    Refusing to scream

    Please just give the final blow
    Life is faint
    I cannot feel I know
    Not one complaint

    You have taken it all
    Child no more
    Nothing needed to recall
    Left to ignore

    Soon it will be your turn to die
    Nothing shall hurt
    For paralyzed am I
    This our goodbye


    9:38 pm






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      [I can comment...yesh! Okay, Meagan, I am so proud that you learned how to spell! It just warms my heart...slowly, I'm getting back to rhyming in my poems...]

    Your verses inspired with it's deep meaning and the darkness that surrounds it. You are truly a favorite of my writers, you always have been seeing as you are always penning something that just blows my mind away.

    Paralyzed...the title drew me in, and I sat very still whilst reading to get into the mood...soon, I found that I was paralyzed. Great, gurl. You keep writing this good...(bleep)!
    | Posted on 2007-11-25 00:00:00 | by Twisted | [ Reply to This ]



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