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    dots Submission Name: how funnydots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    20
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 339/415/260
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 230
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 713



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    what is it like now?
    how does it feel to be second best
    for all those years
    you taunted me
    how does it feel?

    I've got all that I could ever need
    while you're jsut scrapping by
    I laugh when I see your number
    on my phone at night.

    I hope you think about me
    and ache
    cause I ached and bleed for you.

    Im not looking back
    and im working for my life
    you sit around
    and prove that everything i've said is right.

    How funny is it
    that you've got so much to lose
    when i've already lost it
    and i've got so much more to gain now.




    Submitted on 2007-11-17 21:45:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think it's very funny. This is a very encouraging poem. I sounds like it helped you to write it and that is what's most important. It sounds like this person can't taunt you anymore and I'm happy for you there, it sounds like it said more about what kind of person they are than it ever said about you and you portray this very well here.
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by fate_s nemisis | [ Reply to This ]



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