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Submission Name: how funny dots

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Author:	scardnscared
ASL Info:	20
Elite Ratio:	2.87 - 339/412/258
Words:	115

Class/Type:	Rant/Venting
Total Views:	218
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	713

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how funny dots

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what is it like now?
how does it feel to be second best
for all those years
you taunted me
how does it feel?

I've got all that I could ever need
while you're jsut scrapping by
I laugh when I see your number
on my phone at night.

I hope you think about me
and ache
cause I ached and bleed for you.

Im not looking back
and im working for my life
you sit around
and prove that everything i've said is right.

How funny is it
that you've got so much to lose
when i've already lost it
and i've got so much more to gain now.

Submitted on 2007-11-17 21:45:20 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
I think it's very funny. This is a very encouraging poem. I sounds like it helped you to write it and that is what's most important. It sounds like this person can't taunt you anymore and I'm happy for you there, it sounds like it said more about what kind of person they are than it ever said about you and you portray this very well here.
| Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by fate_s nemisis | [ Reply to This ]

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