Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
    • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
    • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Saturday night'sdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    34yesplease69NV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.56 - 38/35/44
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Rant/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 272
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 487



    Description:
       Let me know What happens on your Saturday night's


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsSaturday night'sdots
    -------------------------------------------


    It all happens on Satruday Night
    The good
    The Great
    The big
    The small
    Yes it happens on Saturday night
    The happy
    The sad
    The dark
    The light
    When it happens on Saturday night
    The Medeorcer
    The outrageous
    The quite
    The loud
    Everything happens on Saturday night
    The love
    The war
    The wealty
    The poor
    What happens on your Saturday night's




    Submitted on 2007-11-18 13:56:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      umm...your pic intrigues me...why???...i have no [censored] clue

    poem was ok and my Sat are not all the same

    cheers
    | Posted on 2009-10-21 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this one too. It overcome's satureday boredom! :)
    | Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by Heidiluv | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is just awsome... I LOVE it...
    In the small town where I live there is really nothing to do so everyone just goes and hangs out in town on Saturday... I really felt this poem! It's very original... this one's going on my favorites!

    Great job!
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?    		7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    153069



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry