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    dots Submission Name: Saturday night'sdots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Rant/Nostalgia
    Total Views: 1460
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    Bytes: 487



    Description:
       Let me know What happens on your Saturday night's


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    dotsSaturday night'sdots
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    It all happens on Satruday Night
    The good
    The Great
    The big
    The small
    Yes it happens on Saturday night
    The happy
    The sad
    The dark
    The light
    When it happens on Saturday night
    The Medeorcer
    The outrageous
    The quite
    The loud
    Everything happens on Saturday night
    The love
    The war
    The wealty
    The poor
    What happens on your Saturday night's




    Submitted on 2007-11-18 13:56:59     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      umm...your pic intrigues me...why???...i have no [censored] clue

    poem was ok and my Sat are not all the same

    cheers
    | Posted on 2009-10-21 00:00:00 | by clay | [ Reply to This ]
      I really like this one too. It overcome's satureday boredom! :)
    | Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by Heidiluv | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem is just awsome... I LOVE it...
    In the small town where I live there is really nothing to do so everyone just goes and hangs out in town on Saturday... I really felt this poem! It's very original... this one's going on my favorites!

    Great job!
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by CaughtRedhanded | [ Reply to This ]


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