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    dots Submission Name: Daddy, This is for youdots
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    Author: YvonneJoyce
    ASL Info:    16, f, wa
    Elite Ratio:    2.92 - 11/13/24
    Words: 204
    Class/Type: Poetry/BrokenHeart
    Total Views: 90
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    dotsDaddy, This is for youdots
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    I know raising me wasn’t easy,
    It was long and it was hard.
    But you told me to stay strong,
    And go the extra yard.

    Though my teenage years,
    Were just a little rough.
    I wasn’t big,
    Or I wasn’t tough.

    I didn’t want to listen,
    To all the stuff you had to say.
    I always thought you were some man,
    Just getting in the way.

    I wanted to live my life,
    Not have anything to do with you all.
    I know what would have happened,
    If you would have let me fall.

    I think those few months,
    The ones in the past.
    Are gone forever,
    Because I didn’t want them to last.

    So I learned,
    The hard way to stand.
    Still with each lump,
    I found your hand.

    I soon found out that you,
    Were one amazing dad.
    The dad I thought,
    I never had.

    You have so much to offer,
    Drawing from you an inner strength.
    And stubborn pride,
    Of equal length.

    So now you know the reason for this,
    I didn’t write it because I was blue.
    I wrote this because I don’t say this nearly enough,
    “Daddy, I love you.”




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      It's a very touching poem. I never had a good relationship with my father, it wasn't because I didn't want a life with him, but because he didn't want a life with me. I'm happy you came to your senses. ^-^ good write
    | Posted on 2007-11-19 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]



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